Released Chapter 2 and Android version.


We have released Chapter 2 and the Android version. Hope you like it. ^^

Abbiamo rilasciato il Capitolo 2 e la versione Android. Spero vi piaccia. ^^

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Rift Between Worlds ENG v.0.2.0 for WINDOWS 114 MB
Mar 05, 2022
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Rift Between Worlds ENG V.0.2.0 for MAC 97 MB
Mar 05, 2022
Rift Between Worlds ITA v.0.2.0 per WINDOWS 114 MB
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Rift Between Worlds ITA v.0.2.0 per LINUX 103 MB
Mar 05, 2022
Rift Between Worlds ITA v.0.2.0 per MAC 97 MB
Mar 05, 2022
Rift Between Worlds ENG v.0.2.0 for ANDROID 113 MB
Mar 05, 2022
Rift Between Worlds ITA v.0.2.0 per ANDROID 113 MB
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That seemed rather lame to be honest..., but I can't be certain without more content, aside from fact that there is such a considerably different style of writing... its really jarring, but also makes me wonder if there is a purpose...  Short and not sweet, nothing worth wile aside from a burst of something out of nowhere... I'd seriously question it if I knew more, just feels very odd and out of place.

Hi, this is my first time trying to write a short story and I'm still looking for my style. Thank you for letting me know. ☺️

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I would suggest making the main character feel more like a person. Instead of the narrator telling everything, i think most VNs have the mc think or talk about stuff.

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Indeed, don't want to assume too much too soon, knowing that you are experimenting for the time being helps explain a good deal! :3